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英语作文专题赞赏信写作指导

时间:2018/6/7栏目:英语写作指导

  英语作文专题赞赏信写作指导

宝宝计划  第一部门:文体概述

  赞赏信是人们在遇到一些不文明情形、所购商品行量差、售后服务不知足等情形下处置赏罚赏罚效果的一个措施。经常应用于破费者的利益受损、正常生涯和使命遭到滋扰等令人懊末路的使命。在语言方面,要重视控制分寸,要公正、公正。写作法式模范:

宝宝计划  第一步:注解赞赏启事。

  第二步:诠释赞赏效果,并诠释效果带来的效果。

  第三步:提出公正的建议或期待回复。

宝宝计划  第二部门:语言积累

  经常应用语块

  1. 诉苦

  2. 表达不满

  3. 忍耐

  4. 对……知足

宝宝计划  5. 蹩脚的服务

  6. 接纳措施

宝宝计划  7. 处置赏罚赏罚效果

  8. 预防……发生

宝宝计划  9. 查询会见此次事宜

宝宝计划  10. 以粗暴的要领

宝宝计划  11. 向……报歉

  12. 出乎意料

  13. 不用说

  14. 尽快

  15. 把某事切记在心

  1. complain about

宝宝计划  2. convey/express one’s dissatisfaction

  3. put up with/bear

  4. be content/satisfied with

宝宝计划  5. poor service

  6. take measures

  7. deal with/solve the problem

  8. prevent…from happening

  9. investigate/look into the matter/incident

宝宝计划  10. in a rude manner

  11. make an apology to…/apologize  to…

宝宝计划  12. out of one’s expectation

  13. needless to say

宝宝计划  14. as soon as possible

  15. bear sth. in mind

  套用句式

  1. 我写信是赞赏关于……

  2. 这几年我对你们的服务都很知足,但是我写信是表达关于……的不满。

  3. 我对……不知足有一些主要启事。首先,……更蹩脚的是,……最后,……

  4. 我真诚地欲望你能认真查询会见这件使命,和接纳适当的措施防止类似事宜再次发生。

宝宝计划  5. 你若能尽快接纳措施处置赏罚赏罚这个效果,我将谢谢不尽。

  1. I am writing to complain about…

  2. I have been content/satisfied with your service for years but I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about…

  3. There are some main reasons why I am not content with… . At first, … What’s worse, … Eventually, …

宝宝计划  4. I sincerely hope that/It is my sincere hope that you will look into/investigate the matter/incident seriously and proper measures should be taken to prevent such an incident happening again.

宝宝计划  5. I would appreciate it very much if you could take measures to deal with/solve the problem as soon as possible.

宝宝计划  第三部门:满分模版

  Dear Sir/Madam,

  My name is /I’m _____(自我介绍宝宝计划). I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about ______(赞赏的内容).

宝宝计划  ________(简述招致抵触的事宜). I _____(表达自己曾做过的起劲). But_______(赞赏启事一). Besides, _____ (赞赏启事二). To be frank, ______(客不雅不雅的议论,以示忠诚). To make up for it, I suggest ______ (表达自己期待的处置赏罚赏罚妄图). I sincerely hope you can better your service and that mistake won’t arise again in the future.

  I am really annoyed about it. I believe you will take my complaints seriously. I am looking forward to your early reply.

  Yours sincerely,

  Li Hua

  模版范文

  奇爱的司理:

宝宝计划  我是李华,贵旅馆的一名主顾。我写信向您赞赏贵店令人不满的服务。

  我在贵店栖息的1月28号到1月30号时代,贵店的服务有太多让我不满的地方。首先,我发现我的行李箱在被贵店的一个行李员送至房间后破损。另外, 卫生间的马桶漏水。更蹩脚的是,楼下酒吧的噪音每晚一连到深夜影响我的安息。我对贵店的服务很是掉落望,而且欲望您刷新服务质量以防这样的效果在以后依然发生。

宝宝计划  我对这件使命真是很末路火。我信托您会认真看待我的赞赏。欲望尽早回复。

  李华

宝宝计划  Dear Manager,

  I am Li Hua, one of your hotel’s customers. I am writing to complain about your unsatisfying service.

  During my stay at your hotel from Jan 28 to 30, the service in your hotel left much to be desired. To begin with, I found my suitcase broken after they were carried to my room by one of your porters. Besides, water was leaking out of the toilet in the bathroom. Worse still, the noise from the bar downstairs went on so late into the night each night that I couldn’t get good rest. I’m disappointed with your service, and I hope you can better your service in case the same matter arises in the future.

  I’m really annoyed about it. I believe you will take my complaints seriously. I am looking forward to your early reply.

  Yours sincerely,

  Li Hua

  第四部门:实战突破

宝宝计划  习作修改(做随笔改错,背经尺度文)

  Dear Sir,

宝宝计划  I’m writing to express my dissatisfaction about the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought in 20th Apr. 2015 at Teemall. Ten days before that, it didn’t ring or sent text messages. Then I took them to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three month for a new one. Later I went to the repairman. He said since it was a new model in China, it was impossibly to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hear that. What can I wait that long? Therefore, I sincerely hope you can send to me a new one of same model. I would greatly appreciate it if you could take measures to solve the problem as soon as possible.

  Yours Sincerely,

  Li Hua

宝宝计划  1. in→on, 详细的某一天用介词on。

  2. before→after, 在多长时间以后用after。

宝宝计划  3. sent→send, or并列的两个动词都接纳原型结构。

  4. them→it, 特指的买得手里的这一部手机。

  5. month→months,双数形式。

  6. impossibly→impossible, it is +adj to do sth.

宝宝计划  7. hear→hearing, 介词后用动词的ving形式。

宝宝计划  8. What→How, 若何用how。

  9. send to→send,及物动词。

宝宝计划  10. One of same→one of the same, 特指。

  好题调研

  假定你是李华,上周六,你有一次不兴奋的就餐履历,对餐厅的服务员态度异常不知足。于是你给该餐厅老板写一封赞赏信。要点以下:

  1. 效果:牛肉面有苍蝇,服务员态度粗暴。

  2. 请求:餐厅谢罪报歉。

  重视:1. 词数100左右。

  2. 可以适当增添细节,以使行文毗连。

  Dear Sir,

宝宝计划  I am Li Hua, a frequent customer in your restaurant. I have been pleased with your excellent service for years but now I’m writing to express my dissatisfaction about the poor service of your waiters.

  Last Saturday, I went to your restaurant to have lunch but I had an awful experience. When having beef noodles, I suddenly found there were two flies in them, which disgusted me a lot. So I asked the waiter to change another dish. Out of my expectation, he didn’t change it but said in a rude manner that he was too busy to solve the problem. Needless to say, such a way of treating customers is unacceptable.

  It’s my sincere hope that you can investigate the matter seriously and make a formal apology to me.

  I look forward to a better service next time.

宝宝计划  Yours Sincerely,

  Li Hua

  第五部门:升华演习

  假定你是李华,你在上周日搭坐102号公交车,该公交车司机的不文明行动让搭客很末路怒。于是你向公交车公司写一封赞赏信。要点以下:

宝宝计划  1. 司机的不文明行动(年夜声讲话、紧迫刹车、态度粗暴等)。

宝宝计划  2. 欲望尽快查清此事。

  重视:1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增添细节,以使行文毗连。

宝宝计划  第六部门:总结反映

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