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城乡差距英语作文:Rural-urban Disparity

时间:2018/6/7栏目:英语作文范文

  城乡差距英语作文:Rural-urban Disparity

  原创: 栗佳

  People’s living standards have improved greatly because of economic development in recent years, but it has also brought about the problem of rural-urban disparity based on the fact that the resources and developments of these areas are imbalanced.

宝宝计划  Several problems can be caused by the disparity. Firstly, as numerous young or middle-aged adults choose to migrate to cities to pursue better employment opportunities available only in urban centers, many children and elderly people are left behind and cannot get the necessary care they need, which may lead to educational problems for children and the decline of life quality for senior citizens. As a result, there might be a negative impact on social development in the long term. Besides, due to the lack of human resources, rural areas would find it more difficult to develop local economy and alleviate poverty.

  To solve these problems, the first step is to adjust the current policy. Governments should invest more in undeveloped rural areas and encourage local people to start business or establish trade relationship with other regions according to their own features and resources, which can introduce more job opportunities and generate income. At the same time, basic infrastructures in rural areas ought to be constructed, such as healthcare centers and transportation facilities. Better development expectancy would encourage labor force to flow back to revitalize local economy, thus diminishing the economic disparity between rural and urban areas.

宝宝计划  A harmonious society should provide all citizens with necessary social services and everyone can share the result of a country’s prosperity. The disparity between cities and rural areas is a worrying trend but it can be addressed with proper methods and policies.

  (推荐师长教员:郭丽君)

  作者心得

  在英语学习历程当中,相比于听力和浏览,白话和写作的提升是相对艰辛的,一部门启事就是演习的缺乏。假定只在临考前泉源对白话和写作阻拦突击训练,语言的输入能够就会显得左支右绌。不外,假设想在无限的时间里在白话和写作上取得质变,最主要的照样年夜量演习。以写作为例,拔取好的范文质料,重复浏览推想作者思绪、表达、直至内化,演习多了,不知不觉间下笔就和之前纷歧样了。

宝宝计划  这篇文章是雅思作文题,属于一篇申报型作文(Report)。效果分为两个部门:1.问启事,2.问处置赏罚赏罚措施。小我以为这样的效果比纯粹问启事或许处置赏罚赏罚措施要相对容易一些,由于这对头脑的请求没有那么高,一个效果写出一两条谜底再公正拓展便可以了。

宝宝计划  雅思作文和四六级作文的一年夜不合在于,前者对头脑和推理的请求相对高一些。四六级作文经常车轱轳话重复说,语法和句式华美能够都是加分项。但这样的套路在雅思作文这里行不通,雅思作文有点像是写中文的群情文,每个启事或看法列出来,要有自己的论证,文章要有详细内容,言之无物会被一眼看透。在这篇作文里,当写到针对城乡差异所能接纳的措施时,我着重强调了政府的角色功效,好比增强对不蓬勃地域的投入,勉励其与其他地域培植商业关系等等,尚有公共交通、医疗等基础行动措施作育,由于只需人们看到了经济生长的远景和欲望,他们才更宁愿留上去作育家乡。墟落经济生长起来了,城乡差异自然就会相对镌汰。段首一句写不雅不雅点,前面的便是详细叙述,支持自己的不雅不雅点。

  在英语学习方面,年夜部门时间我是快活的,由于我以为这是一个很居心思的历程,而且学好英语也能带来异常多的现实赞助。成就感和兴趣相互促进组成了良性循环,以是在面临自己巨年夜的无知时才干沉下心,低下头一连起劲,以期走得更远一些。

  (作者:栗佳  文学院2016级研究生)

  教员点评

  作者在雅思索试中取得了总分8,写作7.5的高分。中国学生雅思匀称写作成就不到5.5,7.5无疑是一个令人知足的高分。在听、说、读、写四项手艺中,“写”是最为棘手的,全球考生的雅思成就也是写作为最低分,作者的写作心得值得我们沉思与自创。

  雅思年夜作文的评分尺度有四个方面: task response (义务完成情形)、cohesion and coherence (毗连和毗连)、lexical resources ( 词汇富厚水平)和grammatical range and accuracy( 语法结构的多样性和准确性), 虽然这四个方面是相互联系关系的,须要我们培植起准确的英语写作理念,对英语语篇结构,头脑语言等有一个所有的优胜控制。 正如作者所说: 雅思作文较量看重头脑逻辑。中文写作较量迂回,直接,而英文习气直接清晰地叙述不雅不雅点,并适当加入毗连表达使文章毗连自然。

宝宝计划  这是一个申报性效果。提出城乡差异这个话题,让你议论辩说惹起的效果和处置赏罚赏罚妄图。这类效果与辩说性效果不合,不须要供应自己的态度,而是阻拦剖析和建议。作者紧询效果睁开议论辩说,在第一段引出话题,提出资源和生长的不平衡招致城乡差异;第二段提出城乡差异带来的效果,作者主要着重探讨了对墟落的影响,虽然也能够或许推敲对都市的影响, 毗连词的应用:firstly, as a result, besides...使得文章清晰毗连;第三段提出处置赏罚赏罚措施, 着重强调了政府的角色功效;最后一段总结全文,提出展望。中国学生在英文写作中经常套用模板,不清晰学术性写作的特点和尺度,一味追求长难句华美语言,组成表达重大烦琐,逻辑不清,而这篇文章防止了这些效果,较好地做到了reader-friendly,语言精练,逻辑通行,毗连流通,论证清晰、公正,词汇句型应用富厚,无邪,显示了较为扎实的写作功底。

  科场上展示出的作文实力本质上是寻常浅易起劲学习的体现。万丈高楼平地起,质变才干质变,正如作者所说:“最主要的还是年夜量演习。以写作为例,拔取好的范文质料,重复浏览推想作者思绪、表达、直至内化,演习多了,不知不觉间下笔就和之前纷歧样了。”多读多写永世是前进写作的不二窍门。

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